The (Old) Pocalypse

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Aldurin
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Aldurin » 25 Dec 2010, 02:58

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I suck at my image editor big time so the best I can draw for now is Andruis in a dark corner.
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Bonzi77 » 03 Apr 2011, 10:56

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Somebody incorporate this into the next comic.
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Zarthanon » 09 Apr 2011, 10:05

What is it supposed to be? Cyrillic Christmas gifts?
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Unbeknownst » 11 Apr 2011, 18:45

It was some random Russian spam about giving 'Decorative Cosmetics' Away for the holidays this year. It was really Funny. I wanted to keep it around, but decided to delete it.
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'Poison' is such a harsh word. I prefer 'Potion of Shut the Hell Up.

You know what the best part about this weather is? The Zombies will freeze to death. Er... Undeath.
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby The Ghost » 24 Apr 2011, 14:17

Just FYI I have started to draw the next installment of the comic and if you guys don't want to see where MY twisted mind is going to take this you should hurry up, because once the Three comic's that I scripted while I was watching a twilight zone marathon are completed this version of the Pocalypse will be so fundamentally shifted that trying to bring it back into sync with the main plot will be quite literally impossible without one of those "Agh what a horrible dream!" tricks. :roll: Even if You all hop to it I will publish the alternate SL as written under the Artist area, because I am just grooving on the plot I have created. :D

(Point of note, I am not going to kill Joe or anything like that, what I am going to do is ADD a new character and change the relationships of some of the characters drastically.) :ugeek:
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby rockboy3970 » 15 Jul 2011, 07:07

No offence but does old bernie look like a druged hippie or is it just me?
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby The Ghost » 15 Jul 2011, 08:12

That he does.
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Joe » 16 Jul 2011, 20:45

Haha yes, the old Bernie was MUCH different than the Bernie we know, today :D

In The old Pocalypse, Bernie was meant to be alone in the Base - no Jess and no Harry. The Base's original function was to house Bernie's vast marijuana farms (like in the underground farm in the movie "Pineapple Express"). Being a successful marijuana dealer before The Pocalypse, Bernie had accumulated tons of money to build his dream bachelor pad, within the Base. When The Pocalypse hit, Bernie had the perfect shelter :D

Bernie was also meant to be a neurotic coward who could only face zombies if he was high. So, the marijuana would have acted as a tool to make Bernie more into the brave, self-less person we know today, albeit a bit more stoned.

I dropped this idea when I dropped the original comic idea. Bernie somehow became more of a technically-gifted, level-headed hero than a bumbling stoner. Then, I threw in a sister and a robot :D
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Unbeknownst » 16 Jul 2011, 21:21

I kinda have to wonder where the sister and the robot came from.
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Re: The (Old) Pocalypse

Postby Joe » 16 Jul 2011, 22:21

I'm not sure, actually! I just knew that the story needed more characters to provide dialogue and so that I could play with more personalities. Jess was originally meant to be Bernie's girlfriend (haha, sounds gross now :D), but I changed her to Bernie's sister, literally last minute! My wife wanted me to stick with the girlfriend idea to keep things interesting, but I got scared and ninja'd the sister idea in :D

As for Harry, I just felt that the Base needed someone to run it and since Bernard Sr. wasn't around, who better than an artificially intelligent robot?

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