My First Pocalypse Sprite

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My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Kleppy » 12 Jul 2011, 04:54

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I hope I did good on this, I am still learning.
Tell me what I can improve on.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Kleppy » 12 Jul 2011, 05:41

Is anyone gonna help?
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Kevak » 12 Jul 2011, 06:02

Pretty good for a starting one, you can always texture/shade it a little bit more to add the effect of it being in 3D, though it's fine like currently is and isn't needed.

For the next one, try adding ears to give yourself a challenge, and maybe a really weird hairstyle (such as a bulbous bouffant) for challenge.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby HD Cerberus » 12 Jul 2011, 10:02

Kleppy, just so that you know, you have to give people adequate time to respond to your post before you start fishing around for anyone to help. I notice that you left the bones of an hour between your two posts, but on this forum you can expect to wait between 24 and 48 hours before someone might reply.

Wait for people to come to you. :)
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby The Ghost » 12 Jul 2011, 11:12

I like that she has long hair, haven't seen that before. Try doing a sprite sheet.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Silverware » 12 Jul 2011, 13:13

The hair seems to be on an odd angle, make it cover a little more of the face, that will make it look better imho.
Otherwise a fairly decent sprite. Try shading as the others have suggested.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Kleppy » 13 Jul 2011, 01:46

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How about that?
Give me some pointers.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby The Ghost » 13 Jul 2011, 05:09

Improved, but remember to shade the back as well as highlight the front.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Silverware » 13 Jul 2011, 13:33

Sorry, I should have explained better, I meant the side of the hair.
The fringe is a little too low now. Also the facial highlight is too bright. should only be like +20 value, from the main skin color, using HSV.
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Re: My First Pocalypse Sprite

Postby Squizzel » 16 Jul 2011, 03:21

Hmm, what I always found useful is looking at sprites Joe has made. I've made a few, wih my friend Dan making most of the sprites I've uploaded. But I can try doing some tricks I've learned into another tutorial and stick it in my sprite shop, if you're intrested. (I would link my starting tutorial, but you can already do basic spirtes well ^^ )
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